>>1800
>>1802
Well, sorry about your shit taste problem. But if you care to better it, let me try in all seriousness to explain why I dislike it. And again, it's the dialogue not the set up I got a problem with, I like that part.
For starters, it's unnecessary:. "yes keep tickling my feet" is easily conveyed through her expression and, you know, the vibrator she's holding between her legs. It's not even laughter or beggging or whatever, which can add to the feeling of intensity of a pic, but we'll get to that in a sec. As an aside, I'm pretty sure he must know that that bit's essentially pointless, because the line itself is as lazy as BadCrab's bad dialogue can possibly get, which makes me think he probably put it there just because it's what's expected of him at this point, but that's just baseless speculation. Second, last, and most important, I just think it's shit. I don't think 'lee dialogue is hard to fuck up at all, something as simple as her managing to say such an oddly well put together line is already enough to make me think she's barely ticklish to begin with, and what a fuckup that is for your fictional set up where you get to decide how sensitive your 'lee is. The formatting is bland, the three exclamation signs are eye roll worthy, if the shaky text was supposed to do something but bring more attention to the worst bit of the pic it failed. Continuing what I was saying before, better written dialogue will convey important bits that the drawing can maybe struggle to get across otherwise. Not just information mind you, but volume, intensity, reactions other than laughter that inform the scene and the 'lees mindset, like gasping or struggling to keep themselves together or moaning or just about everything else we have phonetic writing of. Giant walls of 'hahaha's are cheap, but boy do they fucking get across that whoever is getting tickled is losing their shit. Fuck, the shape of the speech balloon can do that on its own, but we get the most basic of them all, which implies the opposite. "yes keep tickling my feet" does jackshit of any of that. It's as stock as dialogue can get which only brings attention to how unnatural it sounds, which you should try as hard you fucking can to avoid with 'tickling dialogue', since it's cringe almost by definition except to us weirdos.
So anyways, that's a parragraph worth of criticism of five fucking words that show I have nothing to do with my monday night and "yes keep tickling my feet" is the worst sentence in the english language.
>>1805
>>1806
They're both hot, this is just a terrible example of the latter.
>>1811
I hope I don't get lumped in with that shit, I like both angles, I just don't like, you know, shitty things.